Hornpipe

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  • Tune Database entry

  • Tune Name: Soosephile's Cookies

  • Tune Type: 2/4 Hornpipe

  • Composed By: Julius Li

  • Arranged By:

  • Year Composed: 2007

julius
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Hornpipe

Post by julius » Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:04 pm

This is my first hornpipe. Would really like to know how it is . :lol:
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piperKieran
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Post by piperKieran » Tue Oct 30, 2007 4:31 am

Great job! The last part is especially neat; the key change definitely adds to it. Consider more held notes in the B phrases (the last two bars of the first and third lines) to make the rhythm a little more constant through the first and second parts.
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Post by julius » Thu Nov 01, 2007 1:43 pm

Thanks alot! Am working on that now, but I was thinking that the high As might give some sort of staccato effect to the tune.
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Post by david n. siegel » Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:37 am

Yes, a nice job, and some notable originality.

Post any revisions or additions for here...

-David.
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Post by piperKieran » Wed Nov 14, 2007 1:07 am

Just a few typesetting changes to make it a little more polished. Also, I added two notes onto the run of three in the second part in order to make it mathematically correct.
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