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Hornpipe
Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:04 pm
by julius
This is my first hornpipe. Would really like to know how it is .
Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 4:31 am
by piperKieran
Great job! The last part is especially neat; the key change definitely adds to it. Consider more held notes in the B phrases (the last two bars of the first and third lines) to make the rhythm a little more constant through the first and second parts.
Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 1:43 pm
by julius
Thanks alot! Am working on that now, but I was thinking that the high As might give some sort of staccato effect to the tune.
Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:37 am
by david n. siegel
Yes, a nice job, and some notable originality.
Post any revisions or additions for here...
-David.
Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 1:07 am
by piperKieran
Just a few typesetting changes to make it a little more polished. Also, I added two notes onto the run of three in the second part in order to make it mathematically correct.